Galaxy Enemy
Posted on Saturday, October 3rd, 2009 at 1:29 amQuestion on creative writing for someone else who is interested, bored or someone who just wants 2pts?
This draft is the beginning of a description of the war that raged across the galaxy, an enemy that does not discriminate and homelessness the galaxy was erasing what ever they meet and they have now reached the human world home ... "It had been 3 years since the threat of enemy [1] * have been identified, these eaters of the world, they came out of the shadows of time and are now spread across the great divide [2 *] like the plague destroying all those who were on their way, leaving only death and destruction in their wake "[1 * - the" threat bit enemy will not be in the final draft, the enemy will be replaced by the name of the race of wicked ... so that it reads "there had been three years that the threat had been identified ******"] [The great divide between residents empires and territories that have stood for centuries and are heavily guarded] What do you think of this sentence? Does a good sound? not good? does it change anyway?
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